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Hello I will attach a file that contains 6 parts for the assignement I am working on, I have done part 1 already and will attach the file with the professor’s comments on it, if you can please revise the comments and fix it for me.
I also need part 2 to be done by you, you might need the Project Management app.
I am not asking for part 3,4,5 and 6, only revise part 1 and work on part 2.

Thank you.